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:iconmorganexd:
MorganeXD Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow... that really nice!... ;)
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:iconscottluvsjenna:
scottluvsjenna Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
This reminds me of the song Jar of Hearts.

I love this poem, btw.
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:iconmaskqueraide:
maskqueraide Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ~~
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:iconscottluvsjenna:
scottluvsjenna Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
:D Hey, no problem...
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:iconnanzzyrulezz:
NanzzyRulezz Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
Aww, so sweet and sad at the same time :< But I really like it <3 You've got a talent for writing poems ^^
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:iconmaskqueraide:
maskqueraide Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ~~ so kind of you OTL
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:iconnanzzyrulezz:
NanzzyRulezz Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome ^^
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:icontubesock427:
Tubesock427 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That mess was ugly with you :dummy:
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:iconsounddrive:
Sounddrive Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This goes with the song 'Jar of Hearts' . . . aw . . .
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:iconchaoz-wulf:
chaoz-wulf Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
aw.. :C </3
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:iconxvinfex:
XVinfeX Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful :heart:
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:iconzombie-matrix:
Zombie-Matrix Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is lovely and sad at the same time. Excellent.
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:iconemberthepirate:
emberthepirate Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the pink words say "that mess was ugly with you"....what does that mean?
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:iconsilentandtwisted:
silentandtwisted Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011
So sad...but beautifully written. :) I feel bad for enjoying something that was created from pain. I hope you are well :)
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:iconfazzedin:
fazzedin Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011
Very nice man, Loved it :)
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:iconsilvervampire96:
SilverVampire96 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Arww, that's so cute!! Did you come up with it on your own? xx
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:iconcat-noodles:
Cat-Noodles Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011
*huggles* be brave!
You can do better!
You have a heart they dont!
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:iconsocialspy:
socialspy Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes, love is cruel just as much as it's sweet.
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:iconventures-of-jojo:
Ventures-of-Jojo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist
did you write this wonderful poem or is it a song lyric?
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:iconmaskqueraide:
maskqueraide Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i wrote this
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:iconventures-of-jojo:
Ventures-of-Jojo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist
That makes this even better.
Bravo It's wonderful
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TheOneAndOnlyZouza Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Student General Artist
:heart:
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:iconjadesolar:
Jadesolar Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
*o* oooohw sooo sweet :love:
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PiwyLullaby Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011  Student Photographer
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Nahhhhhhhhhh h~

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That so true mein Sugar . ..:heart:

" Now I sit here alone and cry "
" Thinking of where you are "


I Love this Part so much ;_____________;

Chu're so Gift mein Sugar
Your Poem's ♥
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DeiDei-kun777 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student
aaaaaaw! hmmmm I like it~
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:iconmichi4:
Michi4 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
My favorite is the second verse. This speaks volumes. Well expressed and nice flow and rhyme.
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:iconowl-tamer:
Owl-Tamer Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
I love how this makes me think back on the hard times I went through. Sad memories but sometimes they need to be remembered so it doesn't happen again. Great job!
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:iconsoaringpikachu:
SoaringPikachu Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Really beautiful, I felt the emotion of sadness while reading it. Really a wonderful job :)
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Davey-the-6th-moon Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Writer
It's never easy.
Beautiful piece.
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SolitaryPhoenix Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
U remind me of what d gal who luvs me felt like 1ce upon a time.... just luv it.... feel kinda sad too...
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Atukara Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful .. but yet sadd .
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:iconsupertoast12:
Supertoast12 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.......!! T^T...*crying*
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xXgunderXx Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god... I love this
this is art, I am stunned - it really touched me, because of the lyrics and they way you set up the picture
this is very sad, but beautiful at the same time
good job on this
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silverwolfer Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Photographer
The rhymes seem forced in places,
but the meaning of the poem is clear, though bittersweet
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rinku726 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
;____; Marine.

Very strong, sad, words... yet beautiful at the same time. The rhymes made the heavy message easier to take in. The cute font and drawing helped a lot too... :']

I could somehow relate this on my first love. But what made him happy, made me happy. He's such a nice person even, so up to now he remains as a fond memory. :)

If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to drop a note and I'll help you with all I can. <3 (I counseled a 24y/o man when I was 14. :| XD)
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Sachi0 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
Beautiful poem. :)
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:iconi-rosem:
i-rosem Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really touching :tears:
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:iconqingthing:
qingthing Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that mess was ugly with you <3
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Safira-la-leonessa Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, but when I read the thing about the jar I couldn't help but think of when Jack Sparrow yells "I've got a jar of dirt! I've got a jar of dirt! I've got a jar of dirt and guess what's inside it!" in Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead man's chest. :ahoy: Sorry, I know I should be sad when reading this, but there was a heart in that jar of dirt! I'm a nerd, so I had to point the jar thing out. :nerd: Sorry.
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AxnAkshan Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Such nice words & so well written. I am glad that you are able to take your pain & making good stuff out of them.
Hope you are better now! :tighthug:
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pachiirisu Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
T_T :huggle:
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WateryGrave Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student General Artist
=(
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Kit-Katt Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
So get this! I LOVE IT!!!
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Mew-Suika Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
T^T it's so lovely, gah, i have that teary feeling T^T
Great words, amazing ^^, damn i wish I could write like this!!
My friend absolutely loves this kinda thing, she'll be so happy when I give it to her, or will she be sad coz it has such a touching and deep meaning...?
A-ma-zing!!
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Jamafly Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
It's a strong poem and I think a lot of people can relate. Thanks for sharing thi. :hug:
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Vuza Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This poem is obviously emotional to an extreme, but I couldn't help but see it as kind of generic. It's disjointed in some places and overall pretty lacking in cohesion; it seems like it doesn't stay on one point or idea for very long, and when the idea changes it's extremely sudden.
Sorry you're apparently going through heartbreak though. Wouldn't know personally.
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Midna627 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student General Artist
beautiful :iconlove: but very sad :iconcryingplz:
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:iconp3paula:
p3paula Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very sweet... and sad....
:( :) :hug:
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genericwin Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
; _ ; exactly.
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Eco-Strata Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Humans delimitate their minds from regarding that these things don't matter as much as they imagine they do. If someone hurts you, then it simply means they don't deserve your concern or affection. So many people waste their time bemoaning over such primordial apprehensions. If it wasn't meant to be, it wasn't meant to be... The poem is still very well-written, and nicely said. But the point is that humans should just be blissful as long they are still amongst the living, and that they have opportunities upon their future, yet to be grasped. The detriments of life are not meant to be taken critically. Because if you're not dead yet, you've still got a life to live.
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