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: kiwi fusion .by =maskqueraide

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hope u like. i took note of wat ur guys said in the orange foto, so i hope its better.

i wont be around for abit, but i will try to reply to comments/etc soon !

also, i would like it if u dont steal, copy, ect. i hate it :<

edit: btw, kiwi sounds liek stupoid name for fruite. sounds lika funny word to me, lmao :>

plz. no stealing / reproduce
ask b4 use
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Critique by =JayLPhotography Jul 31, 2010, 2:59:33 PM

Yes! Another splash of goodness!
Fusion it is! The complementary colours do combine and turn into fusion, and what I like about this piece is how the green part of the kiwi stands out so much!
I do love the art of splashing juice on stuff, and this one is cool! It's really like slow motion!
This time, I see that there are bubbles, which the bubbles shows how intense gravity is on the juice...
There is a lot of red dots in the kiwi though, and I think you should take some away...but I still love this piece!
Good job!

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=maskqueraide Jun 22, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

haha XD

~SATIVA85 Jun 3, 2011 Professional Digital Artist

love this!makes me wana have a drink and some fruit!This fruit had a long history before it was as kiwifruit by New Zealand exporters & therefore had many other older names.
* Chinese gooseberry
* Macaque peach
* Vine pear (藤梨 téng lí)
* Wood berry (木子 mù zi)
* Hairy bush fruit (毛木果 máo mù guǒ)
* strange fruit or wonder fruit

=maskqueraide Jun 22, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Oh wow Oo so many names ~~

~LocoHill Feb 5, 2011

hhow did you make the water red

*Belinofente Aug 28, 2010 Student General Artist

Nice water effects, though it seems a little dark. It feels as though the water and the background are there for one another, but the kiwi out of place.

=maskqueraide Aug 31, 2010 Hobbyist General Artist

hmm, ok next time i will make brigher :]

so, the green? or just the kiwi seems out of place?

*Belinofente Sep 1, 2010 Student General Artist

I more I stare at it the more it seems like that particular shade of green. Definitely try this shot again, I'm curious to the results.

Have you ever tried doing the water as you are, only with sliced fruit? Say in example two slices of kiwi instead of one? Or have you already tried that and it not work very well?

=maskqueraide Sep 2, 2010 Hobbyist General Artist

so the shade of green is the issue?

by slices u mean two havles together? or actual slices?
i hav tried but i think i just flopped it

but i will try again, i alwaays do. i also hav other idea, but idk if it will turn out rite >.<

*Belinofente Sep 3, 2010 Student General Artist

I believe so, yes. Unless you think otherwise; it's your opinion that counts.

Actual slices; or how about a variety of fruit slices together? I have faith in your artistic abilities.

~KaironStar Aug 28, 2010

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